THE GAMES WE PLAY PAGE 45

posted 25th Jun 2017, 7:45 AM

THE GAMES WE PLAY PAGE 45
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25th Jun 2017, 7:45 AM

lorddarke

Right, it's Sunday.........Well, close enough.

Please comment if you can. Thanks.

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28th Jun 2017, 3:31 AM

typhon36

And the interplay continues. The Spiders are starving. The captured Bees are full of food that can be readily extracted. Everyone is highly aroused by this stage due to the effects of the stings, the sundry stimulating handling and all the excitement generally. Nobody is going to suffer anything but prolonged forced orgasms.
Sounds like a very good recipe? Especially as Bees are supposed to be delicious here.
Oh well, hope they have lots of fun.
Enjoying thoroughly Ed.

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28th Jun 2017, 8:09 PM

lorddarke

typhon36- Thanks Bob, always love your comments.

Ed.

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28th Jun 2017, 4:02 AM

Lee M

I'm pleased to say I had some small influence on the dialogue on this page.

However, and this is quite belated since Ed and I usually have these discussions before a page is posted... although it may become clear in context, in the last panel it could probably have been made clearer that Ammie is speaking to Damiana at first and then to Cleome.

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28th Jun 2017, 8:12 PM

lorddarke

Lee M- No, you had a LOT of influence on this page!

And yeah, I agree about the last panel, but I can't figure out how....

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28th Jun 2017, 10:28 PM

Lee M

Maybe just start the second sentence CLEOME, IF YOU WANT ...

And I'm always happy to be a positive influence!

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29th Jun 2017, 6:26 PM

lorddarke

OK, I made the change, and I agree, it does help!

And you are an important influence!

Ed.

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